Not Wasted

Well, got the email from the Publisher considering the Ares Gambit, and they were very polite, but formulaic in their decision not to proceed. I’d be lying if I said I wasn’t a little disappointed, but they invited me to submit again with another proposal in the future and they replied to me shortly before the deadline of 12 Weeks, but with enough time passed to consider it – which tells me that I almost made it off the slush pile.

So it’s good news, really. In a way.

Because it means that I can Indie Pub the book and get on with it! 😀

However. There is a question.

There is another Publisher who is looking for submissions at the moment, and they too want exclusivity on my MS, just like the last one. If submitted, this would stop Ares Gambit going out for another 12 weeks.

In a way, that’s handy, as otherwise I have to get on to my cover artist and sort out some test covers, and it also buys time for the editor to pull apart my other books.

And yet…

Anyway, will have to think on it. Go steady out there fellow Adventurers, and as always:

Have a great day. 🙂

Back-Forwards

Welcome to all our new adventurers, and hello to all the long-suffering campers already here!

I regret although I am writing, my motivation is really suffering. I think I manged 300 words today, maybe the same every day, all week. That’s bad considering that the usual amount is 1,000 and I am capable of doing 7,000 in a day.

That number feels like a mountain at the minute.

I’m still having ideas, but I’m currently re-working Jovian Crisis, and it’s a slog. Some writers have trouble with a blank page, but I don’t really suffer from that, but what I do suffer from is Done-and-Dusted’itis.

Let me explain.

When I finish a project, even to first draft, that, in my mind is it – it’s finished, it’s over. I know I have a second draft to do of it, but I hate it. I absolutely hate going back in to sort it all out, because I know it’s going to be a slog. I’m one of those writers people refer to as a ‘Pantser’, aka I do it by the seat of my (trousers if you’re a Brit like oneself) pants. (Hmm, perhaps I could be a ‘Trouserer’, although that sounds somewhat dodgy….but I digress). A huge re-write is literally the effect of writing in this fashion, I accept it, but the other problem I have is that the style of Jovian Crisis is old.

By that, I mean it’s old to me. If you’ve ever handled computer code from 1994, or had to repair something made with old materials, stitched, riveted or glued together the way they used to in 1910, you’ll know what this feels like.

I think another problem I’m facing is the situation a lot of people are stuck with too: nothing is moving. I can’t complain too much, as a lot of people have it a lot worse than I do, I will never say they don’t, but the impasse of it all is now getting…frustrating.

Just have to keep plodding – 300 words at a time!

Well, that’s all he wrote – hope you’re having a safe and productive time of it and making headway with your plans, hopes and dreams.

And, as always, have a great day Adventurers! 🙂

Own Sweet Time

Thought I’d write something and catch up with you all! Thanks to all my long term adventurers and those new to the fold for sticking with it!

Been up and down busy lately, with two projects now sitting in a lull, awaiting decisions. Got one off with an Editor – only because it’s a totally different genre to the one I usually work in, and another still with a Publisher, but now a month gone. To be honest, I’m not worried about the latter. It would be magnificent if they picked it up though, so I hope they do. 🙂

I’ve been working on some role-playing games with people from a forum, so I haven’t been idle, but it hasn’t been work. This is important in both ways, as being creative is good, but being creative without the objective of getting paid is not. Obviously, the act of creation stirs the mind and enthuses the soul, but being an arty person without product in a free market doesn’t pay the bills.

And this is why I call writing work and not art, or the craft. (Even though it is all three).

You have to balance those books. Pardon the pun.

I recommenced work, finally, on the sequel to The Ares Gambit, which is known as The Jovian Counter, and managed to get 500 words done, which is a great start. It’s just a bit of editing and tidy-up, but it pulled me back into the plot and storylines immediately, as though I’d just pressed pause and it was waiting for me to get to it in my own sweet time.

Other than that, I’ve been sitting on my duff doing the housework and all the things a body can do whilst sitting at home. That includes job-hunting (remember those bills?) but I am getting nowhere with it. All I know is that something has to give soon, I’m just hoping it isn’t me.

Be safe, be strong, be content – and as always, have a great day Adventurers! 🙂

Busy, busy…

Apologies to all who follow the blog for not updating in a few days – ten (wait, ten? ten!) to be exact.

I haven’t been idle. I’ve finished my YA book, which may be an adult book, God knows at this point, and have finally found an Editor after trawling the pages of a directory for one. My usual pen-pointer was unavailable and fully booked for almost all year, so I had to “interview” a few candidates to try and get a good fit. Fortunately this is now in the works, with the Editor looking to start on the book in April.

That’s fine, I have other things to do in the interim! Too many bloody things!

In fact -I have to get back to the boulder!

Have a great day Adventurers! 😀

Belay that!

It’s a naval (not navel!) term meaning to stop or put something off. Once more I have decided to play the long game and have sent my MS for The Ares Gambit off to DAW Books, the Sci-fi/Fantasy arm of Penguin books USA.

I thought long and hard about it, considered the wait time and that I still have an ongoing project and that this time, maybe out of all of the times, I might score a hit. On one hand I have the fact that the MS was edited, proofed and polished, ready to go. On the other, it’s turning into an episode from “Where’s the book George??!” (GoT fans will know what I mean).

Well, only time will tell. I will have to grovel to my cover artist again, but he’s a swell guy and I will give him money at some point.

I’ll finish with words wiser and more reliable than my own.

If you can wait and not be tired by waiting,
Or being lied about, don’t deal in lies,
Or being hated, don’t give way to hating,
And yet don’t look too good, nor talk too wise:

If you can dream – and not make dreams your master;
If you can think – and not make thoughts your aim;
If you can meet with Triumph and Disaster
And treat those two impostors just the same;

– Yours is the Earth – and everything that’s in it, and, which is more, you’ll be an author my son.

Rudyard Kipling, If (Abridged..?)

Have a great day Adventurers! 🙂

In Other Words…

Hello folks, welcome to our new members! A good start to the year, are the notifications of eager minds and fellow adventurers!

Well, we have not been slack over these last couple of weeks, and whilst the the world turns and things are nuts, we have no choice but to Keep Calm and Carry On. Dunkirk spirit it might not truly be, but:

While there is a chance of the world getting through its troubles, I hold a reasonable man has to behave as though he was sure of it. If at the end your cheerfulness was not justified – at least you will have been cheerful.

H G Wells.

And I’m a pessimist.

The Ares Gambit has returned form the diligent proof readers at Magic Pencil, and there’s not much I had to do! This is good, as they have claimed (thank you Polly) that “it is your best writing, it’s really good” but she would say that, as she’s one of my pals ;).

I’ve been directed to the submission pages of DAW books who deal mostly with Sci-fi works over 80k. However, I am slightly put off by the fact that they do not allow simultaneous submissions and keep it for three months, only then not to contact you unless they want it.

The counter to this, is that they actually published one of my “Comps”, my comparison books to show what my fare is similar to, and in this case it’s one of my military sci-fi key comps: Armor, by John Steakley. Needless to say this has tossed a spanner right in the works. They do take MS’s from unrepresented (non-agented) writers, so I’m in the frame.

What to do, fellow adventurers? Any advice?

Hope you have a great day. 🙂

New Year

Firstly: Happy new year to all the adventurers that follow this blog! The world is in a strange place at the moment (for everyone it seems) and all I can hope for is that you managed to to get a bit of peace and quiet above all the hullabaloo that’s going on around us.

For this year, I’m not really going to make resolutions (I gave them up a while ago, bad for your health) since the world, as we have seen, likes to scupper plans of us mere mortals left and right. However, I do have plans and objectives I need to adhere to.

I’m still searching for employment, as many likely are, and that will continue, but I still want to be a writer for a living, so I have to put up with that pipe dream as well. I have four (four? Four!) writing projects I want to see done this year:

  • Publication of my Sci-Fi *diatribe* The Ares Gambit,
  • Completion, polishing and publication of my historical fantasy Kids/YA project Short Yarn (working title),
  • Polishing and publication of an Urban Thriller I wrote in 2020, Only Bloody Money,
  • Re-writing and editing of another Sci-fi epic The Jovian Counter.

I was lucky enough to get a few nice things for Christmas (thank you!) and a couple of beer vouchers (that’s a £10 note to those not in the know) the latter of which are spoken for when I ship Short Yarn to Hannah, my preferred editor for a Manuscript Assessment. I’ll bounce it to Magic Pencil, my proofing crew as well.

I suppose I could throw it at an Agent, but at the moment I want robust, specific opinions I can trust, that don’t suffer from the woolly “It’s not right for us” etc.

So those are my ambitions – for now.

I hope that as the year goes forward, things improve for us all and that all our aspirations and objectives are fruitful, and as ever thank each of you for accompanying me through the woods, to sit around our campfire and share our trials and stories.

Always and any way you can: Have a great day, Adventurers! 🙂

Market Value

I’m pensive due to listening to the excellent Surviving Mars soundtrack, and still turning over the recent experience with the publisher in my head and it has been exceptionally useful to codify my understanding of something I gleaned from David Morrell’s The Successful Novelist, in which he cautions about writing to an existing market, or developing a niche to fill.

I think one of the reasons that I was turned down – and it’s an understandable business reason, is that my book wasn’t going to make mega-money for a publisher who needs money. It’s quite costly to print and push out a book, as Indie authors and self-publishers know, especially if you take the time and effort to hire editors, cover creators, etc.

The two most recent signings for the publisher I was querying were about football (soccer to our cousins across the pond), namely the Liverpool Football Club under Jurgen Klopp, and a book about self-help with mental illness, with the tagline: “This book will save your life.”

Now both of those subjects have markets. Massive, massive markets. I’m not going to get into a debate about mental health, because that is not the purpose of this channel, and I’ve had a breakdown – so I think I understand my own small corner, but I will touch on it as a topic wholesale.

Both of these books have been written for/to market and both are non-fiction. The thing about that kind of market is that it never changes – fortunes of the football club wax and wane, naturally, but fans will always want those type of books. You can keep bringing them out, just like FIFA video games. You’ll be in money forever.

Self-help is a little bit of a different story, in the fact that the subject’s popularity DOES change, so there’s a bit more of a risk there. Another problem with this is the same that fiction authors face – the market is saturated very quickly when the subject does become popular.

Not everyone likes football, but the following is huge and largely stable. Everyone wants to be well, but advice changes constantly and certain health fads shift, but this allows for the release of another book.

They are both ‘dead certs’.

Contrast this now with a niche slice of genre called Science Fiction. You expected that, right? 😉 Agents for this are hard to come by, as not everyone reads it. If you break into it though, there is more chance of acquiring a cult following (it seems to me anyway) which will give you years of value.

For my ha’penny, writing to market limits the books you want to write, unless you really want to write them, and if so – good for you. However, it strikes me that when an idea comes to me, the story needs me to write it and it can be anything. Orson Scott Card says a writer should have up to six ideas a day. I don’t know about you, but I can’t think of six football stories that would interest my readers.

Writing to market puts you at the mercy of the market, which is why I think non-fiction does so well at it, because it doesn’t have to be inventive and readers are already looking for it. There is a wealth of information to help you get those books out. There’s a reader waiting. The good news is, if your fiction stories are good, they will find readers.

There ARE exceptions in fiction (although to me, they are breakouts, after which the author goes on to do what they want once they’re noticed and have a loyal following).

Or, I could just be a cynic. How atrocious.

It’s also something I came across in a conversation with a professional editor and independent small press owner. When Querying, have your comparison titles ready, at least three. One to say what genre, one to say who buys it and finally one to demonstrate how well it will sell. I missed the last trick.

It’s not just you who wants to make money from it, Publishers want ‘get-rich quick’ too.

Well, that’s all I have today, Adventurers. Leave a comment if you feel I’ve got it wrong or if you found my ramble thought-provoking – and as always, have a great day. 🙂

Oh Well. Next!

Had a post up yesterday, demonstrating my uncertainty over what to do regarding recent communications from the Publisher I was querying.

I heard back, and they have decided not to go forward with The Ares Gambit. To be fair to them, their reply was personalised, very professional and polite, and if I’m reading between the lines correctly, it’s down to the fact my book, (while commercially viable – Hannah’s appraisal, not theirs or mine and I trust her), is not going to appeal to the market as it stands.

Got to take it on the chin. I half expected it, which helped, but even so.

There was of course no feedback on my MS, as they don’t provide that – but – this is where my sixth sense rattles a little, I got the impression my letter of query was decent, because they advised me other publishing routes were available, which means they read it past the first line. Well, either that, or they think the book is worthy only of residing in the unexplored mass of self-published work. But that would be terribly cynical and churlish to believe.

Do I think that anything I said in my blog or follow-up letter torpedoed me? No. Not having a huge Social Media presence? Possibly. Not spotting the trend/writing to market? Absolutely not. Do I think the themes of the book are outdated? Not a chance. Editors like it, readers like it.

It’s just not worth it for them. Their most recent signings are about Liverpool Football Club, which is a hugely popular concern, and a no-BS mental health practitioner – again, a popular topic at the moment.

My book is niche – not a broad church that will net them millions of pounds quickly, when their industry needs money.

The freedom of certainty brings another, small problem. I stood Ken down (or up) and told him I was going to wait until the middle of January because I didn’t know which way the Publisher would jump until then. He expressed understanding and wished me a Merry Christmas. Top lad, Ken.

However, I now do not want to mess him about and tell him different, so I’m going to use the time between then and now to work on the book. Again.

Even though I love it, I’m fed up of it.

Anyway, that’s your lot.

Have a great day, Adventurers! 😉