Going Down in Flames

Warning: 40k nerding, and tales of Writers’ Folly ahead.

Commission Artwork by Danny Morrison

The title and artwork refers to a short story I prepared whilst working with my writer’s room over the Bolter and Chainsword called ‘Down In Flames’.

It’s Part One of a three-part project to document a few POV’s of characters around the Badab War.

I did it mainly to set up the writing room, and to keep my hand in with writing stuff, since I was between projects at the time. It was roughly this time I put in for the Black Library Open Submissions 2023, but was ultimately rejected.

I wrote two Short Stories for that, (10k each) plus a couple of pitches. If you want to read them, you now can, all for free.

Down In Flames is a Short Story about a Fire Hawks Sergeant and his Astral Claw buddy, a bromance that sours over the course of the series since the two men find themselves on opposing sides of a civil war. The format is in PDF.

I’ll be posting my other (rejected – boo!) offerings, Ferrymen, and The Fall of Swords and Stars, here, in the upcoming weeks.

Until then, have a great day, Adventurers.

In other news, this is my 200th post, and nearly four year anniversary of blogging/writing. Time flies.

128 Days Later

The keen-eyed amongst you will spot that I can’t count, and am going for the cheap laugh.

That’s about the state of my humour at the moment, since I’m running on empty. I’ve queried 25 agents with War Mages: Sharpshooter, but not a single one is interested. One of them, who will remain nameless, promised to get back to me and didn’t.

She didn’t reply to any follow-up emails either. There’s a point where non-response becomes rude, when you’ve said you’ll reply to someone. That wasted a lot of my time.

That’s 40 agents and publishers overall, in the past 3-ish years with four different projects, but who’s counting, right?

I’ve not been idle since my last post, having written 3 short stories of circa 10,000 words, and once again thanks to magic pencil for the help, but I think my steam is about to run out.

I have one last novel to push over the hill, and since I received no interest, I have commenced Independent Publication.

That’s the proof. The artwork is purloined from the internet, so it won’t be the final markup, since the wonderful Ken over at Creative Covers has been an absolute diamond and is supporting me with mates’ rates.

If you want a cover, check him out.

With any luck, War Mages: Sharpshooter will be out soon this year. Once that happens, I’ll be re-evaluating my ambitions, and whether or not it’s worth it to keep going. I’ve actually Queried two Publishers in 2023, so whatever results from that, will likely be the indicator.

Hope you have a great day, my fellow adventurers.

Snapshot

Sharpshooter has come back from Magic Pencil, and I’m pleased to say there wasn’t much to do with it, thankfully, and only a few comments! 🙂

So, I’m grinding that, and Covenant at the same time, because you know; fun never stops.

Well, that’s it Adventurers – hope you have a great day. 🙂

Scorch Dearth

Sounds like a Napalm Death album.

I write with reference to my on-off, on-off love/hate affair with my Vampire Urban Thriller The Covenant. Last week I tore it to shreds, scrapping a 70,000-word bowl of utter dog water, down to something I could work with.

I had just over 10,000 words left. Killing your darlings is one thing, but this was first degree scriptocide. (Yes, I made that word up).

A week later, and I’ve completely refurbished what I had, and am now up to 25,000 words. They’re not perfect, but the story is so different now, it’s not even the same book.

The name of the novel works really well, so it stayed, but I can tell I’m writing fresh, and things feel better. The direction feels better.

Is it the ‘wow’ novel an agent wants? Don’t know, some of it has been a grind, but ideas are coming, they make sense, and the MS is talking to me. It’s still the militaristic, bloodsucking take on the Cold War, so I’m happy enough.

I might just get it finished this year.

Anyway, my brave Adventurers, that’s your lot!

Hope you are doing well, and as always, have a great day. 🙂

Cookie Crumbled (Part 2)

Success isn’t final, failure isn’t fatal: it is the courage to continue that counts.

Winston Churchill.

Right, let’s bake this biscuit. I’m going to refer to yesterday’s post a lot – don’t worry, I’m not going to dissect it, just bust it up a little to get the choc-chips out. 😊

One thing that struck me were the interesting comments on the market, proving the theory: Publishers (rightly) want an easy win. If your social media doesn’t have a bazillion followers, or you’re not a celebrity, you’re a huge risk to them.

Ever was it thus. This is why you don’t write to market. You can’t write the book you want if you do – you’re writing what other people want. Fashions change, attitudes and opinions change. Don’t rely on a gap in the market as strategy. Is it opportunity? Well, that’s a different post.

My latest rebuff was painful, but exceptionally useful. I’m grateful for such an honest and explicit email, from such a busy agent, considering the usual brusque responses. It helped to benchmark my efforts (personal preferences aside).

No comments were made on typos, plot, structure. No criticisms were made for POV, the nuts and bolts. Nothing bad was in it at all (just the result I didn’t want, damn it!). And, at least I know he read it! 🙂

Lots more to think on for me – especially how to make the jump between good writer, and as he calls it, ‘special’ (I may have mentioned this leap before). The other moral of this story, is: Not everyone likes your style of baking, or the odd ingredients, but someone will love it. Unfortunately, everyone has to if you’re a publisher.

I just need more choc chips in my cookies. 🤔

Anyway, that’s my ramble. Hope it’s sunny where you are, and as always, my patient Adventurers, have a great day! 🙂

(PS I bothered some more agents, because I like my baking – even if I do set fire to stuff!)

Cookie Crumbled (Part 1)

A big thanks to everyone for liking, or sending kind thoughts – you know who you are!

Unfortunately the agent I mentioned yesterday has declined. It was a substantial email explaining why. I’m going to take an unprecedented step here, and let you see it for yourselves.

“Dear Arron,

I read your material over the weekend, as promised. I can see the imagination and intelligence at work here, but I can’t honestly say I loved it. After fifteen years running SFF imprints in London publishing before setting up the agency, I’m all too aware how difficult it is to get a publisher interested in a new writer, so I feel that I do have to love my clients’ work 100% – personally and professionally – to do the best possible job.”

“If I don’t feel that strongly, I’m the wrong agent. Every new author needs both an agent and an editor who do love their work. It’s hellishly difficult getting the bookselling chains to take a new novelist seriously, so that initial enthusiasm is vital. If an author’s prose doesn’t set me on fire, first and foremost, I say no, as do editors in this situation. Most UK editors see around thirty books every week and only take on one or two debut novels over an entire year.”

“The entry level for a new novelist now is ‘special’, not ‘good’. This is partially because sales and marketing directors have so much more power than they did 15 and more years ago. If they don’t believe they will be able to sell a first novel into the bookselling trade in numbers, they’ll block the editor from acquiring it in many companies. A senior editor told me a few weeks ago that even if he loved an author’s writing, he wouldn’t make an offer until the book that was submitted to him was 100% right for the market – he has just acquired an author whose previous four novels he (and everyone else in London) had turned down despite liking them a great deal. Thus, I have to believe the writers I take on and their novels are truly wonderful. I wasn’t entirely drawn in by your story and characters – I wasn’t thinking WOW, which is what I look for.”

“Another agent may well feel differently. So often, it’s about unquantifiable gut reaction to an individual author’s voice and the pricking of your thumbs rather than ‘I wanted more of THIS or less of THAT’.”

“FYI, I’ve taken on about forty writers as clients and turned down well over 10,000, so far…I know it can be as difficult to get an agent as it is to be taken on by a publisher. You just have to keep plugging away – and there are many more agents dealing with SFF and related areas than there were when I started the agency in 2004.”

“It took the best author with whom I’ve ever worked – [FAMOUS AUTHOR REDACTED] – six different novels written over more than a decade before he clinched his first publishing deal, so it can be a long road. It’s about getting that agent who chimes with your writing totally (and then finding an editor and publisher who feel the same).”

“All best wishes for the future,

[REDACTED],”

Well adventurers, this is why it’s hard, and this is what you’re up against. Let me be clear – this is a one way email. When you get something like this, you, like I, might want to respond with how much material you’ve produced, or how long you’ve been in the profession.

Don’t do that. Take it on the chin, and move on. Am I disappointed? Absolutely, but he wasn’t the first, and God willing, he won’t be the last to turn me down. The only problem is most of the other SFF agencies he mentions have already turned me down flat as well! :p

Anyway, there’s a second part to this, but that can be for tomorrow. Hope the sun is shining where you are, and have a Great Day Adventurers! 🙂

Nervous Deposition

Agents. If you want to be Trad Pub’d (Traditionally Published, to those in the know, what, what) you need one. On Thursday last, I contacted a fellow to follow up my submission of my historical fantasy War Mages: Sharpshooter, emailed two weeks before. This agent has a solid client list and a quick turnaround, welcoming chase-up emails.

Good so far.

When I bothered him again, to my horror, he advised me he didn’t have it. 😮 He’d checked his spam, the bin, all of his folders etc, but I wasn’t even in the ‘contacts’ list.

Bloody internet had eaten it!

After a flurry of quick emails, and a resubmission, he told me he was downloading it, and would read it over the weekend. Champion! I’m expecting to hear from him monday.

Since Friday:

The life and times of a ‘perspiring’ author.

So, if you have a kind thought, a good word, I’d be very grateful for them coming my way!

That’s the lot, my loyal, redoubtable, Adventurers!

Wish me luck, and as always, have a great day! 🙂

Second Helpings

Busy couple of weeks these last.

Out of 12 Agents, so far I’ve had three replies to decline my manuscript, and five deadlines without reply (basically, no response). So, the quick thinkers that you are reveals there are only four left to come in, and they’re a while off.

I have been working on other things, and passing out the rough manuscript for War Mages: Sharpshooter to any poor sod who’ll read it – including my German friend, who is picking apart my umlauts.

Yes, umlauts are a real thing.

However, this leaves me with only a handful of prospects, so doing what any manic author does, I plagued some more Agents in a second tranche. Now, I have never submitted to these Agents before, and God only knows why, since their bios are right up my typewritten alley. I can only put it down to them not being open to Submissions.

Thinking on it now, I wonder if I just wasn’t ready. My experience with Querying and manuscript prep has increased significantly, and this is mainly thanks to emotional support from friend and family, closely followed by professional encouragement by my latest editor.

Let’s see how we get on.

Anyway, that’s it for today. Hope you have a great day Adventurers! 🙂

Agent Provocateur

No, not some band from the 1980’s, although there were a good few…I have submitted War Mages: Sharpshooter to twelve literary agents, so we’ll see how we do.

I did my best to meet all the agent’s submission guidelines, so I hope I get a fair shot. What I did notice were so many different standards!

One agent wanted everything pasted into an email body, another wanted synopsis and 10k words all in one document, then another wanted the synopsis and three chapters in one document, other agents had other preferences, it was mind boggling!

I think with all the hubbub, I might have missed something, which is regrettable, but I have a feeling the whole idea is to keep submitters on their toes…and the process was a little nerve-wracking.

It is how it is – they will either be interested, or they won’t. All I can do is try. After all, if they say no, I lose nothing by asking.

That’s it Adventurers, I hope you have success with whatever you’re up to! As always, have a Great Day. 🙂

Let’s Go to Work

Well, Magic Pencil has the manuscript for my Alternative Historical Fantasy War Mages: Sharpshooter, and whilst they bounce the red marker across it, I have to start the laborious task of getting things ready for one of the most nerve-wracking, and frustrating trials a writer can face: Querying.

NOTE: There are other horrific trials I have yet to discover, but of which I am aware, like book signings where no-one turns up! 😮

Now, I’ve waxed, waned and waivered over Traditional Publishing, but even with all that, I’ve settled on the fact it’s a very important process for Indie authors to consider, but why?

Firstly, it’s a route to print. There is a (bloody slim) chance someone might like your work. This is important, because a Publisher has a lot more resources available to them than someone like me (I don’t help myself here though, as I have a tight-knit circle of people I can rely on) and their Marketing departments are highly tuned, well-oiled machines. Typesetting, cover art, editing, copy-edit and management, financial advice, legal support, everything is there.

Secondly, it is a route to improvement. The quality control and assurance Querying imposes is a discipline I need, and one I can endure for sake. It teaches me how to write letters, elevator pitches and boosts my confidence – and confidence brings results when I’m trying to hoodwink an agent into believing I’m not a hack. It also makes me go back through my Manuscript and work it until the polish shines. Having said that, if I know I have a rough spot I just can’t work out, I leave it because…

Thirdly, it’s a route to feedback. Now, 90% of the time, I don’t get this, and my understanding is a lot of hopeful authors don’t either. It’s the weakest and most inconsistent part of the process. The work ends up unread on a slush pile, (some agents kindly call it a Submissions Inbox, but it’s the same thing), and I get nothing. Agents are busy folks out to make money (all those resources aren’t free), and occasionally no reply is better than a bad one. However, when I do get feedback that encourages, it’s uplifting and makes the heartache worthwhile.

Querying makes me face the hard reality of why I want to be a professional writer. My manuscript has to be the answer.

Anyway, that’s all I have for now.

Don’t forget to have a great day Adventurers! 🙂